tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6879287627424877497.post5512595307848625961..comments2023-10-24T01:50:21.436-07:00Comments on Poems About Nothing in Particular: SaturationNathan Landauhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15192227257742194090noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6879287627424877497.post-30968280483640909452010-01-10T13:12:09.234-08:002010-01-10T13:12:09.234-08:00Oh! I never commented on this but I already shared...Oh! I never commented on this but I already shared it with a friend because I love it! The image of this old, dirty mop and its relationship with the word "saturation" is sensual and stirring. Really creative :)Cora Jeannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13429513675686435012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6879287627424877497.post-82956251502023799392010-01-08T17:57:05.841-08:002010-01-08T17:57:05.841-08:00i really like this: "too saturated
with old m...i really like this: "too saturated<br />with old messes to clean anything."<br /><br />yes. yes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6879287627424877497.post-41622386016887902482010-01-07T19:18:06.038-08:002010-01-07T19:18:06.038-08:00You paint so wonderfully with words. Very visual ...You paint so wonderfully with words. Very visual writing.Radio Nowherehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03676632225985024369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6879287627424877497.post-54245341195847616562010-01-06T21:44:32.758-08:002010-01-06T21:44:32.758-08:00You've created such a great metaphor here and ...You've created such a great metaphor here and delivered it with perfect simplicity. Love it--especially the last two lines--great work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6879287627424877497.post-63006802956623207142010-01-06T15:53:52.458-08:002010-01-06T15:53:52.458-08:00This poem and "In Poetry, The Body" are ...This poem and "In Poetry, The Body" are so beautiful. your imagery is lovely--your words carefully chosen. i love, love that you seem to use line breaks purposefully rather than arbitrarily breaking up rhythm. i will keep reading :)Chinyere Nwosuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581699069658142031noreply@blogger.com