tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6879287627424877497.post7415721288982567650..comments2023-10-24T01:50:21.436-07:00Comments on Poems About Nothing in Particular: 30/30 Day 5: DistanceNathan Landauhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15192227257742194090noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6879287627424877497.post-164431741549584392011-07-06T10:32:18.516-07:002011-07-06T10:32:18.516-07:00I was not entirely happy with this one, and its le...I was not entirely happy with this one, and its length certainly helped it feel like a cop out. There is most certainly a better word as well, which I may scrounge for if I find the time.<br /><br />Yes, these are all new so far. I may take day 7, 14, etc. as revision days to work on stuff from prior to the project or earlier 30/30s, so thanks much for the critiques.Nathan Landauhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15192227257742194090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6879287627424877497.post-89026046173386310482011-07-05T23:20:13.987-07:002011-07-05T23:20:13.987-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6879287627424877497.post-21046902570741114682011-07-05T23:17:19.766-07:002011-07-05T23:17:19.766-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.com