I-III
IV
V
VI
VII.
The cat's hiss
is that of a short fuse.
We are all ill-
tempered these days.
You arrived
at my doorstep
all messed up,
hands badly bandaged,
a grenade
lodged
in your broken teeth.
After I replaced the pin
with a bent paper clip,
you told me between gasps
(the nerve
of a tooth
exposed)
that it was the only
forbidden fruit
you could find.
5 comments:
Nathan, I read through all of the pieces, and all I can say is Wow! There are so many things hidden here in plain sight, that I have no idea where to start. Just need to go back and begin again, and move so much more slowly. What I can honestly say is that I feel that I have found treasure! I'll be back, I only hope you can be patient.
Elizabeth
This is beautiful Nathan. I agree with Elizabeth, treasures await your readers!
YES....nicely done Nathan
lovely poem!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/07/15/i-want-2-bee-worthy-of-this-waking-dream/
here is mine!
Hmmm interesting and mysterious, i have to keep reading to see what your "treasure" actually is, I am still trying to figure it out XD thk for sharing =D
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