That morning,
as the news chattered
about broken records
we discovered the sandbox
––a haven for all things
static and plasticized––
frozen solid. The arms
of plastic men beckoned.
The maples bent over
with interest and ice.
With a few hours of work,
the action figures could have been
drying on the dish rack,
Spider Man dwarfed
by the china platter,
The Hulk roaring
face down into the dish towel,
but the howling alarm
from across the street
of a car impaled
by a fallen tree limb
shook us instead
into discovering
how difficult it is to tell
the difference between
shattered glass and ice.
10 comments:
Liked this. The images...the flow...
lost in a maze
enjoyed it.
well said.
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Enjoyed this piece... lovely images.
~laurie
Excellent -
I love the way you told this story.
Brilliant imagery and restrained emotion here. Well done!
This poem reminded me of my sons toys and then the surprise at the end, beautifully crafted. I could see it all up to and including glass that looks like ice. The maples bent over
with interest and ice.
OMG, this is incredible. You had me playing in a frozen sandbox and then impaled me with a horrific accident. So much what life is about, the unexpected. Don't think I've visited your blog before. Enjoyed it.
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perfect, I know what ice can do to trees and cars. So far it hasn't been mine either
unbeatable job...
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