Listening to Radio Nowhere, looking as you always do, at the mirror, or more precisely, at the misshapen glass that contains your reflection and all behind you, surrounded by the oncoming road.
I was not entirely happy with this one, and its length certainly helped it feel like a cop out. There is most certainly a better word as well, which I may scrounge for if I find the time.
Yes, these are all new so far. I may take day 7, 14, etc. as revision days to work on stuff from prior to the project or earlier 30/30s, so thanks much for the critiques.
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I was not entirely happy with this one, and its length certainly helped it feel like a cop out. There is most certainly a better word as well, which I may scrounge for if I find the time.
Yes, these are all new so far. I may take day 7, 14, etc. as revision days to work on stuff from prior to the project or earlier 30/30s, so thanks much for the critiques.
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