Tuesday, July 05, 2011

30/30 Day 5: Distance

1.

Listening to Radio Nowhere, looking
as you always do, at the mirror, or more
precisely, at the misshapen glass that
contains your reflection and all behind
you, surrounded by the oncoming road.

3 comments:

twitches said...
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Nathan Landau said...

I was not entirely happy with this one, and its length certainly helped it feel like a cop out. There is most certainly a better word as well, which I may scrounge for if I find the time.

Yes, these are all new so far. I may take day 7, 14, etc. as revision days to work on stuff from prior to the project or earlier 30/30s, so thanks much for the critiques.